Feedback on my pitch

After filming my pitch I asked my audience;

Do you like this idea for a film trailer?

Yes I like this idea because it sounds very unique and different. I think this is the right idea to use for your specific target audience because they would find your idea very interesting and they would be engaged in it. I feel like the target audience would be able to get more involved with this idea as it is something they would enjoy.

What would you change about my idea?

I really like how jumpy and dramatic it sounds. I also think it sounds very professional. However, it had lack of locations. Some of my target audience found that I need to use different locations to make it even more dramatic and serious for them. If I make these changes, it would make my film idea even better