Tuesday, 19 January 2016
Monday, 18 January 2016
Unborn Script
Unborn Script
The scene opens with a wide shot of Shikiel and Twyla walking across the street holding hands. The couple are discussing what their going to do tonight.
Twyla : Where do you wanna go to eat?
Shikiel : I dunno you choose?
Twyla : Lets try that new Chinese place in town.
Shikiel : Nathanael told me about that place, its suppose to be nice. Ming and Moon
Twyla : Whose Nathanael.
Shikiel : A guy I know from work. I don't speak to him a lot.
Later that night the couple are leaving the flat. Shikiel leaves his phone on charge and gets a text from Nathanael. Twyla checks his phone. its a message from Nathanael. Twyla begins to text him pretending to be Shikiel. The next day Twyla tells Nathanael the truth saying that she was the one texting him. The two start talking again.
A couple weeks pass
Shikiel spots Nathanael outside of a coffee shop while walking home. He begins to approach nathanael until he sees Twyla walking towards him. The two hug and walk into the shop. Confused about whats happening, Shikiel texts Twyla asking where she is.
Twyla checks her phone.
Nathaniel : whose that?
Twyla : its no-one
Later that night, Shikiel asks Twyla where she was.
Twyla: I was at college all day. Why you asking?
Shikiel: because I saw you with Nathanael.
Twyla : What? no i wasn't. even if i was how would you know?
Shikiel : Dont lie to me, I saw you.
The couple have a huge argument, which ends in Twyla storming out of Shikiel flats. She slams the door and begins to walk out the flat. She texts Nathanael before she walks down the stairs. Suddenly a hand appears that pushes Twyla down the stairs.
A hooded man runs down the stairs grabbing Twylas phone.
two weeks later, Nathaniel sees Shikiel walking down the street.
Nathaniel : Hey Shikiel how you been?
Shikiel : alright, sorry i can't talk I'm in rush.
Nathaniel grabs Shikiel arm while trying to walk away.
Nathaniel: Hows Twyla, I haven't seen her in ages.
Shikiel looks at Nathaniel nervously, making direct eye contact.
Shikiel: why whose asking
Nathaniel : No-one just wondering how she is. Are you two alright.
Shikiel : Its none of your business, I' already told you I'm in a rush. bye
Later that night Shikiel trys to get into his flat, but the locks have been changed. Suddenly he hears a girls scream coming from the forrest.
Shikiel : Hello whose there?
the screams get louder and a bright light begins to flash from the bushes.
Shikiel : who are you come, come out?
He begins to walk towards the bushes slowly.
Shikiel spots Nathanael outside of a coffee shop while walking home. He begins to approach nathanael until he sees Twyla walking towards him. The two hug and walk into the shop. Confused about whats happening, Shikiel texts Twyla asking where she is.
Twyla checks her phone.
Nathaniel : whose that?
Twyla : its no-one
Later that night, Shikiel asks Twyla where she was.
Twyla: I was at college all day. Why you asking?
Shikiel: because I saw you with Nathanael.
Twyla : What? no i wasn't. even if i was how would you know?
Shikiel : Dont lie to me, I saw you.
The couple have a huge argument, which ends in Twyla storming out of Shikiel flats. She slams the door and begins to walk out the flat. She texts Nathanael before she walks down the stairs. Suddenly a hand appears that pushes Twyla down the stairs.
A hooded man runs down the stairs grabbing Twylas phone.
two weeks later, Nathaniel sees Shikiel walking down the street.
Nathaniel : Hey Shikiel how you been?
Shikiel : alright, sorry i can't talk I'm in rush.
Nathaniel grabs Shikiel arm while trying to walk away.
Nathaniel: Hows Twyla, I haven't seen her in ages.
Shikiel looks at Nathaniel nervously, making direct eye contact.
Shikiel: why whose asking
Nathaniel : No-one just wondering how she is. Are you two alright.
Shikiel : Its none of your business, I' already told you I'm in a rush. bye
Later that night Shikiel trys to get into his flat, but the locks have been changed. Suddenly he hears a girls scream coming from the forrest.
Shikiel : Hello whose there?
the screams get louder and a bright light begins to flash from the bushes.
Shikiel : who are you come, come out?
He begins to walk towards the bushes slowly.
Feedback on my Production Company Logo Ideas
All these logo's are possible logo's to use for my trailer for my production company logo's. The name of my production logo is going to be Dark Sky production. I tried to make all of them different so that my target audience had different ones to choose from. A lot of my target audience liked the second production company logo because they are used to see production logo's on a black background and this one is different. However, they thought I could've made the text different to make it more exciting for them. This would ask help to attract my audience more.
Many of my target audience didn't like the third production company logo, they thought it was too confusing and they couldn't read what it said. However, they did think it was different and interesting.
The first and last example of the production company logo was liked a lot, because everything stood out on the page and they could see everything clear. However, they would've liked the background colour to be different so that it makes it more exciting and interesting for the audience. This would also attract more people to watch the film.
Friday, 15 January 2016
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